Originally posted by mariab
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In this case, Balfour wrote:
"Known to have been the perpetrator of many serious offences, he had only been convicted of two."
How likely is it that the reader would guess that he meant the following?
"Known to have been the perpetrator of many serious offences, and having been convicted of a number of them, at the time I saw him he was serving a sentence for only two of his convictions."
I'd say it's extremely unlikely the reader would guess that. In fact I'd say it would be virtually impossible.
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