Originally posted by Iconoclast
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You've taken a snippet of conversation out of context with nary a hint of what led up to Anne's reference to the 'forgery thing.'
Those who have read Inside Story will recall that Barrett had previously admitted to Shirley that he had forged the diary (this took place in the back garden the day before Mike's drunken, quickly retracted confession to Harold Brough) and without proper context we have no idea what Anne is referring to.
The only reference to Mike's secret, non-circulating affidavit in the above snippet is your own interlinear commentary in brackets!
Tsk, tsk. Very naughty, Old Man.
Your readers don't want your guiding hand leading them down the garden path. They want to see the entire transcript without your editorial musings sprinkled in.
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