Originally posted by cobalt
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A few thought on BJ's remark as remembered by Jeannie: 'My father says these places are dens of iniquity.' It's a strange type of mature adult who quotes his father's moral precepts inside a dance hall. Not much of a pick up line in its own right. A bit of a turn off I would think. Did you ever go to a dance hall and say to a prospective (sexual) partner, 'My mum/dad says?' It's a passion killer.
Agree!
"These places are dens of iniquity" would be pompous enough, but "my father says these places are dens of iniquity" takes it to a whole other level of prissy!
I guess it's not inconsistent with his "you know what happened to the adulterous woman" and "I prayed at Hogmanay" chat.
In terms of his patter, he certainly was not a skilled operator!
Remember he is uttering the words inside one of the very establishments his father has denounced. So how can BJ be claiming his father as a moral authority whilst at the same time flouting the very authority he is proclaiming? It is completely contradictory: he either accepts his father's moral precepts or he does not. So what's he doing here dancing around looking for a shag? Is he a religious fanatic or a atheistic rebel?
very good point and something that I'd not considered before.
Maybe Helen and Jeannie should have sensed something awry here, as the bouncers and manager did. Maybe they did but settled for a cheap taxi home.
This is something I've pondered but not reached any conclusions about.
On the one hand, it seems likely that on leaving the Barrowlands Helen and Jeannie were in it for a free ride home.
However as the journey progressed and it was suggested that the taxi was to drop Jeannie off first and then double back to drop Helen, there could have been no doubt that BJ's intention was to get Helen alone.
This would have been immediately apparent to both Helen and Jeannie.
I can only assume from this that Helen was "up for it" and Jeannie was aware of that and happy to facilitate.
I'd bet my bottom dollar that there would have been some form of surreptitious communication between the sisters to establish that Helen was indeed wanting to be left alone with BJ.
That's generally how it works!
IIRC Jeannie said something like she got out of the taxi round the corner or just along from her house as she didn't want BJ to see where she lived (or did I imagine that?).
I guess she must have sensed something a bit "off" but didn't want to spoil Helen's fun, probably assuming that Helen could handle the weirdo with the crap patter!
Finally, the word 'father' if accurately reported is a little unusual. In conversationalist Scots the forms 'dad,' 'da,' or 'faither' were more common and still are to this day. 'Father' has a clear religious resonance which actually anticipates the Bible John blather that Jeannie remembered in the taxi journey. BJ's form of register was clearly that of a religious person in my view which seemed a bit 'cute' at the time to Helen and Jeannie but turned out to be lethal. Such a man must have had this as a regular feature of his verbal discourse. It could hardly be hidden. Barn has no memory of such a register from Templeton.
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