Originally posted by Jon Guy
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Indeed so.
For me, that neatly sums up the Schwartz problem. Liz had to find her way to the ground somehow, courtesy of whoever killed her, and here we have Schwartz thinking he is describing a reasonable scenario that explains how she met her downfall (pun intended). But the reported injuries do not appear to add up to how Schwartz saw it all go down. Far from it in fact. No physical evidence for her being thrown down at all, never mind violently, by the average Saturday night drunken thug who doesn't know his own strength.
And if you can get over that little obstacle there's a chunk missing where the same man supposedly takes stock while letting the object of his aggression pick herself up, dust herself off and even take her sweeties out, before he starts all over again, but this time getting into quite a different stride (pun that tends to creep up unbidden) that leaves her with only the signs of this fatal second wind.
If Schwartz thought his account of Liz's ordeal was self-explanatory and helpful, I'd say he was mistaken on both counts.
Was he perhaps only guilty of using his dramatic licence to create more of a scene than he had actually seen?
"Was that a dagger I saw before me?"
"No, 'twas only a pipe you fool."
"Didst I not hear the woman scream three times, but not very loudly?"
"No, 'twas only the owl screaming and the crickets crying."
"I was only trying to help."
(Translations from the Hungarian Phrase Book. There never was a hovercraft full of eels.)
Love,
Caz
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