Mmmm, ītis a pity, is it not? But then again, as long as things need a bit of correction, Iīm happy to oblige! Like this:
Yup. And anyone but you-know-who can see that the writers age, the function of the pen and the writing spoace afforded all belong under the obvious canopy of things influencing the writing abilities.
If the factors listed have no obvious similarity with eachother then it becomes necessary to specify which factor the "similar things" have a similarity to. If you don't do that, it's impossible to infer "levels of anxiety" as an unnamed example of one of those "similar things" that may account for the handwriting differences. Levels of anxiety is simply not a "similar thing" to either pen function, available space or age, whereas if he had stated that "other things" may account for the differences, a great many other possibilities are encompassed in addition to the sentence starting to make a good deal more sense.
BUT once you find a common factor, you have also found a similarity (they may fall on you), and then you are actually allowed to speak of "hippos, Eiffel Towers and meteors and similar things
That doesn't make sense.
In order to make sense, you'd need to speak of hippos, Eifel Tower, meteors and lots of other different things. Things that have the same effect despite their dissimilarity with eachother.
In the same way that natural disasters donīt look, smell or feel similar, so donīt they.
But gird your loins and keep battling away with the poster you expressed your public intention to have as little to do with as possible.
who may be around some more - who knows?
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