Originally posted by c.d.
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Backed up by the fact that Schwartz couldn’t speak English and was using an interpreter (and we have no way of knowing how competent an interpreter he was? Maybe he just knew enough to make himself understood but not enough about the subtler aspects of language that a natural speaker would appreciate?). No reasonably literate English speaker would use the phrase “screamed but not very loudly,” because all dictionary definitions of ‘scream’ include the word ‘loud.’ Schwartz was trying to communicate that the sounds made by the woman weren’t very loud. Therefore the use of the word ‘screamed’ was inappropriate. Too much is made of this in terms of trying to see mystery.
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