Swanson's notes on Stride's murder

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  • Robert
    Commissioner
    • Feb 2008
    • 5163

    #16
    OK, wild guess :

    'by that token he would have the best sight of something murderer'

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    • Pandora
      Detective
      • Dec 2015
      • 105

      #17
      Originally posted by Robert View Post
      OK, wild guess :

      'by that token he would have the best sight of something murderer'
      The more I look at it, the more I think the final word could be "murderer" as you suggest.
      Cheers,
      Pandora.

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      • Pandora
        Detective
        • Dec 2015
        • 105

        #18
        On reflection, I think the first paragraph could read something like this...

        "Thus it’s said to have been at 1:35 : by that time the victim had been already murdered."
        Cheers,
        Pandora.

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        • Robert
          Commissioner
          • Feb 2008
          • 5163

          #19
          It could be 'victim' or 'woman' and 'already' looks good, but what is the word before 'already'? It doesn't look like 'been.'

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          • Pandora
            Detective
            • Dec 2015
            • 105

            #20
            Originally posted by Robert View Post
            It could be 'victim' or 'woman' and 'already' looks good, but what is the word before 'already'? It doesn't look like 'been.'
            Hi Robert, I left a couple of the circle loops of Swanson's scribble on that word, I've had another go and erased them, so you can better see the word. So I think "been" could fit.

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            Cheers,
            Pandora.

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            • Robert
              Commissioner
              • Feb 2008
              • 5163

              #21
              Thanks Pandora, yes it's clearer now.

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              • Hamrammr
                Constable
                • Feb 2010
                • 74

                #22
                Hi,

                Not sure if this is going to help much. I've tried scanning/photographing the scribble again but the document I have isn't the best scan even though I'm sure it was the best that could be done at the time (2002). Anyway, below are links to another shot, plus the page of the report before the scribble and the page the scribble is on. At this point in the report Swanson is trying to draw a comparison between the descriptions of the murderer in Berner Street and at Mitre Square given by witnesses. I've had a go at taking away the scribble myself (below), but haven't really got any further than anyone else.

                Previous page:


                Scribble page: http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/p...psr8wecd8h.jpg

                Margin notes with scribble: http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/p...psllsfvt7t.jpg

                With some scribble removed: http://i410.photobucket.com/albums/p...psg6x4n9jj.jpg
                "We want to assemble all the incomplete movements, like cubists, until the point is reached where the crime can commit itself."

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                • Errata
                  Assistant Commissioner
                  • Sep 2010
                  • 3060

                  #23
                  "This is said to have been at 1.35, by that time the woman had definitely been murdered."
                  The early bird might get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese.

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                  • GUT
                    Commissioner
                    • Jan 2014
                    • 7841

                    #24
                    Originally posted by Errata View Post
                    "This is said to have been at 1.35, by that time the woman had definitely been murdered."
                    Looks close, maybe even exact.
                    G U T

                    There are two ways to be fooled, one is to believe what isn't true, the other is to refuse to believe that which is true.

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                    • Pandora
                      Detective
                      • Dec 2015
                      • 105

                      #25
                      Originally posted by Errata View Post
                      "This is said to have been at 1.35, by that time the woman had definitely been murdered."
                      Agreed, just the "definitely" and "been" need to be the other way around.

                      "This is said to have been at 1.35 : by that time the woman had been definitely murdered"
                      Cheers,
                      Pandora.

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                      • Pandora
                        Detective
                        • Dec 2015
                        • 105

                        #26
                        I had another go at it with the new image Hamrammr attached, and I think there's actually an "&" in the gap between the "1.35" and "by" because the gap is too wide otherwise. And the main body of the text uses the squiggle symbol for "&" rather than spelling it out, so it matches.

                        So my final go at the first paragraph is this.

                        "This is said to have been at 1.35 & by that time the woman had been definitely murdered"



                        As for the second paragraph, apart from the first word being "If" and the time "1.35" showing up again, it is largely indecipherable. The second word looks suspiciously like ripper, but that might just be wishful thinking, and doesn't really make sense in context.
                        Attached Files
                        Cheers,
                        Pandora.

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                        • Robert
                          Commissioner
                          • Feb 2008
                          • 5163

                          #27
                          1.35 account?

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                          • Pandora
                            Detective
                            • Dec 2015
                            • 105

                            #28
                            Originally posted by Robert View Post
                            1.35 account?
                            Yes, that looks possible.

                            The only witness accounts from that night, that are at 1:35am are from Lawende & co, so he might be commenting on them. If he's saying that Stride is already dead at that point, we already know that to be well documented, so it seems strange to mention it as a side note.

                            IF however he is suggesting that Eddowes is already dead by that time, then that would be very interesting, considering Lawende & co say they see her very much alive at that time.
                            Cheers,
                            Pandora.

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                            • Errata
                              Assistant Commissioner
                              • Sep 2010
                              • 3060

                              #29
                              Well, in all things context is king, so I suppose if we knew what the hell happened at 1:35, we might be able to tease out the second paragraph.

                              Watch it be something completely erroneous, and that's why it was crossed out. Because it was nonsensical. Thanks Swanson.
                              The early bird might get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese.

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                              • Pandora
                                Detective
                                • Dec 2015
                                • 105

                                #30
                                Originally posted by Errata View Post
                                Well, in all things context is king, so I suppose if we knew what the hell happened at 1:35, we might be able to tease out the second paragraph.

                                Watch it be something completely erroneous, and that's why it was crossed out. Because it was nonsensical. Thanks Swanson.
                                Agreed, in that he did scribble it out, so changed his mind about it in some way. But it is alongside the Lawende & co accounts for the Eddowes sighting, the mention of Stride is further down the page.

                                Probably making a mountain out of a molehill, but intriguing nonetheless.
                                Cheers,
                                Pandora.

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