Jack's Knife

[KatBradshaw]

I wrote this for one of the WS competitions but never entered it.
Its propbably rubbish but thought I would share.

[TomTomKent]

I wrote this for one of the WS competitions but never entered it.
Its propbably rubbish but thought I would share.

It's not rubbish at all. Not much feedback I can give as there is no obvious need for rditing that would benefit it. I would consider submiiting it somewhere just to see what happens. (There is at least one online mag I can think of where this may fit in. If you want the link send me a message. I wont post it openly here incase it is seen a spsamming or a conflict of interest or something).

[KatBradshaw]

Thank you! I do like to write but never really let people read my stuff so I was going out on a limb a bit here.

[Sally]

Hi Kat

I like it, especially the section towards the end. I agree that you should consider submitting it somewhere, see what comes of it. Thanks for sharing it!

Regards

Sally

[KatBradshaw]

Thanks Sally.
I might try writing something else maybe for Casebook examiner.

[Fi Saint]

Hi Kat,

That was amazing, you really got into Kate's shoes. Especially the bit where she realizes she is with Jack - the way she just accepts it, almost a relief. Very believable.

fi

[Canopy]

Well, was "taken into the writing" and felt a by-stander at the time in reading that. I think it good!

C.