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  • Callmebill
    Constable
    • Aug 2017
    • 78

    #1

    J T R haiku

    Jack the Ripper stole
    Mary Jeanette Kelly's heart
    Because he loved her.

    I've been editing all day. I think I 've succumbed to unbalanced inverted comma syndrome.
    David Wilson Professor of Criminology:
    'Connection, connection, connection. There is no such thing as coincidence when you are dealing with serial killers.'
  • Pcdunn
    Superintendent
    • Dec 2014
    • 2323

    #2
    Very good, Bill!

    Here's my submission:

    Francis Tumblety
    Was a quack doctor who had
    No use for women.
    Pat D. https://forum.casebook.org/core/imag...rt/reading.gif
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    Von Konigswald: Jack the Ripper plays shuffleboard. -- Happy Birthday, Wanda June by Kurt Vonnegut, c.1970.
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    • Callmebill
      Constable
      • Aug 2017
      • 78

      #3
      That's brilliant.
      I think we've started a new classifiction! Definitely losing it
      David Wilson Professor of Criminology:
      'Connection, connection, connection. There is no such thing as coincidence when you are dealing with serial killers.'

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      • Pcdunn
        Superintendent
        • Dec 2014
        • 2323

        #4
        Many thanks, Bill.

        I have a knack for poetry, but haven't dabbled with it for a long time. Love haikus, one of the easiest forms to do, if you count the syllables right.

        Think I stumbled across your Crippen site the other day. Looks fascinating.
        Pat D. https://forum.casebook.org/core/imag...rt/reading.gif
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        Von Konigswald: Jack the Ripper plays shuffleboard. -- Happy Birthday, Wanda June by Kurt Vonnegut, c.1970.
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        • Callmebill
          Constable
          • Aug 2017
          • 78

          #5
          You're on a sharp learning curve - no pun intended!
          David Wilson Professor of Criminology:
          'Connection, connection, connection. There is no such thing as coincidence when you are dealing with serial killers.'

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          • Robert
            Commissioner
            • Feb 2008
            • 5163

            #6
            Rugby dance, Monty?
            It's actually a poem
            River for you

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            • Callmebill
              Constable
              • Aug 2017
              • 78

              #7
              Ah, I thought you meant this site. My reply made no sense in the correct context. Now I'm not on my phone - I can see quite clearly.
              And thank you for the comment regarding crippen.
              David Wilson Professor of Criminology:
              'Connection, connection, connection. There is no such thing as coincidence when you are dealing with serial killers.'

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              • Pcdunn
                Superintendent
                • Dec 2014
                • 2323

                #8
                Originally posted by Robert View Post
                Rugby dance, Monty?
                It's actually a poem
                River for you
                Not bad! Poem river is an interesting image.
                Pat D. https://forum.casebook.org/core/imag...rt/reading.gif
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                Von Konigswald: Jack the Ripper plays shuffleboard. -- Happy Birthday, Wanda June by Kurt Vonnegut, c.1970.
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                • Pcdunn
                  Superintendent
                  • Dec 2014
                  • 2323

                  #9
                  Originally posted by Callmebill View Post
                  Ah, I thought you meant this site. My reply made no sense in the correct context. Now I'm not on my phone - I can see quite clearly.
                  And thank you for the comment regarding crippen.
                  No worries. Yes, I was trying to research your question about Neave's dad, and the only hits were ancestry sites, this Casebook thread, and your website. Think we'll need to get a newspaper title to find out more. thanks
                  Pat D. https://forum.casebook.org/core/imag...rt/reading.gif
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                  Von Konigswald: Jack the Ripper plays shuffleboard. -- Happy Birthday, Wanda June by Kurt Vonnegut, c.1970.
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                  • Callmebill
                    Constable
                    • Aug 2017
                    • 78

                    #10
                    I've been looking for six months. Probably turn up when i finish editing my book and throw me a curve ball
                    Thsnk you for looking. Much appreciated.
                    David Wilson Professor of Criminology:
                    'Connection, connection, connection. There is no such thing as coincidence when you are dealing with serial killers.'

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                    • ChrisGeorge
                      Chief Inspector
                      • Apr 2008
                      • 1625

                      #11
                      Yes I know. A haiku is not supposed to rhyme but I couldn't resist.

                      Women murdered night
                      by night: The whole of London
                      shakes, rendered in fright.
                      Last edited by ChrisGeorge; 02-18-2018, 05:43 PM.
                      Christopher T. George
                      Organizer, RipperCon #JacktheRipper-#True Crime Conference
                      just held in Baltimore, April 7-8, 2018.
                      For information about RipperCon, go to http://rippercon.com/
                      RipperCon 2018 talks can now be heard at http://www.casebook.org/podcast/

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                      • Pcdunn
                        Superintendent
                        • Dec 2014
                        • 2323

                        #12
                        Innovative, Chris!

                        Aaron Kosminski
                        Liked to eat from the gutter
                        And was no worker.
                        Pat D. https://forum.casebook.org/core/imag...rt/reading.gif
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                        Von Konigswald: Jack the Ripper plays shuffleboard. -- Happy Birthday, Wanda June by Kurt Vonnegut, c.1970.
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                        • Robert
                          Commissioner
                          • Feb 2008
                          • 5163

                          #13
                          Aaron Kosminski
                          Heard voices in his head
                          But his foot was deaf

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                          • Callmebill
                            Constable
                            • Aug 2017
                            • 78

                            #14
                            Haiku two.

                            Walter Dew viewed,
                            Mary Kelly, Belle Elmore,
                            eviserated.
                            David Wilson Professor of Criminology:
                            'Connection, connection, connection. There is no such thing as coincidence when you are dealing with serial killers.'

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                            • Al Bundy's Eyes
                              Chief Inspector
                              • Sep 2019
                              • 1776

                              #15
                              Walking among you
                              Guilty passions, dark secrets
                              Are never revealed
                              Thems the Vagaries.....

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