Originally posted by Phil H
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I don't need to, I just needed to read the diary, which you admitted you had only read the once. That might explain why you can't simply tell me which marks feature in the diary, and why its author could not have written about them without having seen the MJK photo.
An initial here and an initial there, Phil. Perhaps you could enlighten us as to what precisely the initials are meant to be at this point in the text, what they were supposed to be made with (blood? chalk? Biro? knife? engraving tool?) and, crucially, where 'here' is and where 'there' is. How do you know this is even a reference to MJK's room, and not a reference to initials scratched inside an old gold watch, for example, or embroidered on the 'whoring' mother's hanky?
Then perhaps you can explain what the 'it' is, that the author says was left in front for all eyes to see. No mention of initials (plural) here, no marks in blood on the wall, just an 'it'.
Finally, when it all becomes clear, you can go on to explain a) why the author could not have referred to an initial here and an initial there and a mysterious 'it' without reference to the MJK photo, and b) what you see in the photo that the author saw and exploited.
Thanks for your time. I'm all ears.
Love,
Caz
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