Bridewell:
"I'm looking at the last sentence in particular:
Quote:
Hiding it from the rest of the world, his neighbours included would fail the moment they said "Good morning, Mrs Cross!""
There is a comma missing after included. Big deal. The sentence as such is gramatically wrong until you add that comma. Look at the rest of the paragraph and hopefully you will see what I mean. Hopefully.
"Ted Bundy had no relevance to the point I made. "
Ted Bundy and every other serial killer had and have relevance to the exact point you made.
"That isn't. (It's not what you posted.) This is:"
Nothing circular about that either, I´m afraid.
The best,
Fisherman
"I'm looking at the last sentence in particular:
Quote:
Hiding it from the rest of the world, his neighbours included would fail the moment they said "Good morning, Mrs Cross!""
There is a comma missing after included. Big deal. The sentence as such is gramatically wrong until you add that comma. Look at the rest of the paragraph and hopefully you will see what I mean. Hopefully.
"Ted Bundy had no relevance to the point I made. "
Ted Bundy and every other serial killer had and have relevance to the exact point you made.
"That isn't. (It's not what you posted.) This is:"
Nothing circular about that either, I´m afraid.
The best,
Fisherman
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