Oh, there are lots of things here, aren't there?
Mr Astrakhan gets a highly detailed physical description; Kelly - the woman Hutchinson claimed to have known for three years - none.
Hutchinson watches the couple from outside.... which pub was it again?
Sarah Lewis is on the street at the time - she apparently sees Hutchinson - where's she in Hutchinson's story?
It's a nasty night - cold, windy, icy rain - yet Kelly and Astrakhan meander around Dorset Street as if none of that exists. Astrakhan dressed up in his finery, apparently oblivious to the winter weather [and I'm sorry, but not even Isaacs was that crazy] while Kelly has no hesitation at all in taking up with the well-dressed weirdo; all those rumours about naughty well-dressed weirdo's stalking the neighbourhood aside. They're like characters from a story.
Elements that should be there if Hutchinson's account is remembered from real events are simply absent - probably because they didn't occurred to him while he was inventing his tale - a tale that wasn't even his to begin with.
Mr Astrakhan gets a highly detailed physical description; Kelly - the woman Hutchinson claimed to have known for three years - none.
Hutchinson watches the couple from outside.... which pub was it again?
Sarah Lewis is on the street at the time - she apparently sees Hutchinson - where's she in Hutchinson's story?
It's a nasty night - cold, windy, icy rain - yet Kelly and Astrakhan meander around Dorset Street as if none of that exists. Astrakhan dressed up in his finery, apparently oblivious to the winter weather [and I'm sorry, but not even Isaacs was that crazy] while Kelly has no hesitation at all in taking up with the well-dressed weirdo; all those rumours about naughty well-dressed weirdo's stalking the neighbourhood aside. They're like characters from a story.
Elements that should be there if Hutchinson's account is remembered from real events are simply absent - probably because they didn't occurred to him while he was inventing his tale - a tale that wasn't even his to begin with.
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