Originally posted by Trevor Marriott
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The words you attribute to Dr Gabe are actually paraphrase by the journalist.
The only quote provided by Gabe is about ten lines into the article . .
"It must have been the work of a full half hour," said the Doctor.
There is a reason that line is enclosed in quotation marks, it is actually what the doctor said, whereas the rest of the article bears no quotation marks.
Was there an oil stove in Kelly's room? - no, so that is embellishment by the journalist.
In roughly the third line, we read "And the Doctor said that . . .", which is how the reader identifies paraphrase. In the next line the journalist writes "as he saw it", which, as you know is third-person, meaning the paraphrase continues.
At no point does the narrative begin or include first person recollections, until the line I mentioned above that is enclosed in quotation marks.
Clearly, the journalist knew the difference between paraphrase and quotation, I think you also know, but you either overlook the fact or prefer to ignore the significance of it.
The journalist is padding the quotes with background details he has sourced from newspaper stories.
Another detail is, "the throat was cut from left to right" (my quotes), but Dr Bond tells us the throat was so badly slashed it was not possible to determine which way the throat had been cut, so that detail is also wrong. The journalist continues with his general narrative by providing details sourced elsewhere, not attributable to Dr Gabe. We then read quotations from the witness John McCarthy, so again, there is a difference between paraphrase and quotes.
The article ends with contributions by Dr Forbes Winslow, which indicates the journalist is aiming for sensationalism as opposed to factual content.
You've been had Trevor, by another enterprising journalist.
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